Poem By Me

[Princess Pyro]

okie dokie, here is a poem i wrote a few years back, it's not very well written and it's quite sad, but anyway, here goes:

A Better Place
Her eyes have lost their brightness,
her smile has lost it's flair.
She only feels the sadness,
she only feels despair.

She thinks that no one loves her,
she thinks she is alone..
But she has shut herself away,
in her private zone.

You could hear it in her voice,
and see it in her face.
And now i hope with all my heart,
she's in a better place.

 

[fastchaz36]

thats nice

 

[Snowbaby]

Very nice indeed. Would you mind if I add it to the Expression Centre ?

 

[Tiddlyjen]

holy moo cow pyro thats awesome!

and u said it wasnt good *tsk tsk*

 

[Princess Pyro]

Originally posted by Snowbaby@Aug 15 2005, 05:22 PM

Very nice indeed. Would you mind if I add it to the Expression Centre ?

yeah, that's okay snowy

i didn't actually think it was that good

 

[Snowbaby]

Have more confidence in yourself

I'll add it later

 

[Snowbaby]

*added*

 

[Ninja Girl Momoko]

That was sad snowy

 

[Snowbaby]

Me? I no write it momo!!

 

[Ninja Girl Momoko]

Nonono. Moe was agreeing with snowy. see?

aint it sad?

 

[Fallen Angel]

It's very rare that I find a poem that tells exactly how I'm feeling.

Love it.