Anger Poem

[carmendaily]

This is not the you I've seen
So cold and heartless like a dead thing
I stared at you to expect a tear
Shouting and anger was all I could hear
Now is the time I scare you the most
Never to look back again without any hopes
That wonderful life that will never begin
I thought I would die and felt my chest cave in
I hate the way you lie with no fear or quiver in your voice
This one has to end because you've left me no choice
I thought I was weak but now I am strong
You'll be the one hurting when you see I've moved on

 

[Lugia]

Very good poem. Sometimes writing a poem can really help let some of those bad feelings out. I won't ask what happened but I hope everything is okay.

 

[Doll Leviste]

Wow, this is just wonderful. I love this poem way to go carmendaily. The intensity of your feelings.. just.. wow. This is exactly how I feel. o.o

 

[carmendaily]

Very good poem. Sometimes writing a poem can really help let some of those bad feelings out. I won't ask what happened but I hope everything is okay.

It definitely helped! After not eating for two days, writing this poem actually helped me eat and sleep better! I am okay now, though, thanks for your concern! I really appreciate it!

 

[carmendaily]

Wow, this is just wonderful. I love this poem way to go carmendaily. The intensity of your feelings.. just.. wow. This is exactly how I feel. o.o

I'm glad you like it (though I think it's very elementary) I'm really sorry YOU feel this way because it's not something I'd wish on anyone, I hope you're doing okay!

thanks again for the compliment!

 

[Doll Leviste]

I'm glad you like it (though I think it's very elementary) I'm really sorry YOU feel this way because it's not something I'd wish on anyone, I hope you're doing okay!

thanks again for the compliment!

Well, its not your fault, a bad break up happens to anyone.. :3

 

[momo62281]

This is a great poem. A break ups are hard. But moving on is the best thing. Great job.