Alone

[Princess Pyro]

Alone

Alone in my room,
I sit in the dark.
I wish you were here,
To turn on the light.

Alone in the dark,
I dig the knife deep.
I wish you were here,
To say it's alright.

Alone as I lie here,
My life flows away.
I wish you were here,
To hold me tight.

Alone as I'm dying,
And ending the pain.
I wish you were,
But you forgot me tonight.

Pheenix 2005

i don't like the last line, but i don't know what to change it too. i was thinking perhaps "but you forgot me again" :umm:

 

[Snowbaby]

I think it's perfect as it is. I really like this.

 

[Subby]

Pheenix's expressionism is good. i like it too... *hugs*

 

[Princess Pyro]

thank you

there's more where that came from

i'll post it now