My Poetry *Get's updated!*

[saraerose]

Hey Guys, just tell me what you think, I will update this, and yeah if you want give me ideas

-saraerose






Getting Gifts


"A little of this and that and sugar and spice..."
they say giving gifts is something very nice.
"Oh! This needs so much more peeling..."
They say you get a great happy feeling.



But I like getting gifts so much more,
it's something that I can adore.
Getting Gifts is so great,
even when they come in late.



They say giving gifts is nice,
but I don't like plain sugar, plain spice....
but I love being nice.


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[adampatric]

Hi saraerose.
Just read the poem.
Nicely written.
I think it is perfect and no need for modifications.

 

[girlygirl13]

Great poem!