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Tiggs

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avoiding capital eye contact,
move through the station,
trying to blend in.
no sudden movements
that will startle them.
never show them you are weak.
never show them your cigarettes.

as i walked towards them,
i thought at first it must have been
a new romance,
him holding her close and awkward,
and my face broke into a half
smile as i looked down
and remembered the spark
that ignites, burns and consumes

but something in the ghost
of that memory
is pulling at me
and i take a long sideways glance to confirm.

it is only now i see the tears
and realise that he is lost to her
and that this is an end,
not a beginning.
 
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*gets out tissues* thats really nicely written and sad....
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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Tiggs @ Aug 30 2006, 02:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
Victoria

avoiding capital eye contact,
move through the station,
trying to blend in.
no sudden movements
that will startle them.
never show them you are weak.
never show them your cigarettes.

as i walked towards them,
i thought at first it must have been
a new romance,
him holding her close and awkward,
and my face broke into a half
smile as i looked down
and remembered the spark
that ignites, burns and consumes

but something in the ghost
of that memory
is pulling at me
and i take a long sideways glance to confirm.

it is only now i see the tears
and realise that he is lost to her
and that this is an end,
not a beginning.[/b]



Ill be brutfully honest, Ilove it , but not as much as the others I ve read, but then again you cant mess with perfection.
 
Well , now I re-read it, and got more out of it the second time around, for me there is a somewhat duel ending , The man reflecting on lost love that tells him that was the end , or at the reflecting back , realizes this is not a good way to reflect? It has depth , its deep . I like it.
 
lol, this does not suck either
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I particularly like the following lines

never show them you are weak.
never show them your cigarettes.
 
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A true Royal romantic Tiggs that boy is ,.... got the gift .

Lucky Lottie that lil hottie,.. if I were her I would be always rrequesting this tatment,
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"TIGGS , sing to me,.."lol


maybe he does .
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