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Drabbles

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These are basically short stories that are written with exactly 100 words. There are also double-drabbles (150 words) and triple-drabbles (200 words).

Here's one of mine:

Valentine’s Day

I love you. I know you. You don’t care. My tears fall, making wet trails down my cheeks. My vision blurred to my stupidity. I cower from the world and the laughter. I hide from my idiotic ideas and wishful thinking. “I’m sorry,” I say trying to comfort my hurt, but really I’m not.

That’s why I’m here right now. In my room, I hide behind locked doors. I press the gentle valentine bear against my chest and whisper comforting words in the furry ear. “I’m okay,” then contradict, “No I’m not.” If only you could love me. If only.
 
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The neat thing about drabbles is that they say a lot in just a few words. Well done, and thank you for sharing.
 
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